http://notesfromoffcenter.disqus.com/society and theology from the view of a Christian pragmatist.enFri, 15 Aug 2008 23:38:33 -0000http://notes-from-offcenter.com/2008/08/15/plainsboros-rebecca-soni-wins-200-breaststroke-gold-njcom/#comment-1540210<p>Ha! My brain popped on that one my friend. My youngest bro in law went to the same HS (WW-P North) as Soni and I lived in West Windsor-Plainsboro from 1998 through 2003. Then just north in Franklin Twp. until 2006. So I am an official "townie" even though there are not many "townies" in NJ ;-).</p>Drew TatuskoFri, 15 Aug 2008 23:38:33 -0000http://notes-from-offcenter.com/2008/08/15/plainsboros-rebecca-soni-wins-200-breaststroke-gold-njcom/#comment-1540209<p>Ambiguity warning:</p><p>"the girl who went to the high school of my hometown for 10 years" can be rendered either (as I think you intended) "the town which has been my hometown for the past 10 years" or (as I initially read it) "the girl who went to high school for 10 years" (what? that long?!!). Might I suggest an emendation to something like "the girl who went to the high school of what has now been my hometown for 10 years."</p><p>Cheers,</p><p>--David</p>DavidFri, 15 Aug 2008 23:30:12 -0000